In the photo you look as though you have quite an erect posture, and that the back bodice has too much fabric which needs smoothing towards the seam allowances. Also, unless you are intending putting a shoulder pad in, the shoulder slope and position of the top of the sleeve head don't look spot on. I would try refitting the bodice (sleeve out) and getting the armhole correct first, drawing a line with felt pen on your toile so that you can better see where the fitting line is. The top of the sleeve head looks as though it's beyond the natural shoulder point. Make sure to mark the natural shoulder point on the toile.