@Ouryve that made me laugh.
I had a friend at college who had ‘restaurant clothes' for eating out.
@RachelB wonderful, we have pictures.
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@Ouryve said, your darts are wrong. Darts should point to the fullest part of the bust. They should never be sewn to that point……..unless you’re aiming for a Madonna look.
It’s worth mentioning that all the examples on the Style Arc site are also in the wrong place! The darts are too high. They can be moved down or you can literally sew them so they are further away from the bust.
I always like to get a bodice fitting properly before adding sleeves. This was how I was taught and my tutor was very hot on that. Adding the sleeves will change things slightly but if the bodice isn’t right to start with you’re already on to a loser.
If the dart is folded I would undo it, press the fabric flat and then begin again. You need to know where your bust point is, the fullest part. There are several ways to find this. You may have it marked on the pattern. But that does not mean that is where it should be for you. Have a look at this. It shows how to find your bust point and check it against the pattern.
Don’t worry about the sleeve for the moment. One alteration at a time.